Interlude: Discovery



















45 thoughts on “Interlude: Discovery

    1. Yes, she’s so sweet and innocent. I have this image of her walking in there and being like “Um… I found something REALLY weird in the trash…” all innocently. *sigh*


    1. Hmmm, I may have to argue that my parents wouldn’t have hugged me initially either (had I been trolloping about town)…It would have been a more “DO you see what your behaviors lead to young lady, thank God you just have to deal with babies and not a disease!” Then maybe days later they would have been like “well the childs an innocent and we truly love you” blah blah blah…so all that to say the emotions are at an all time high, and this family don’t like to share their feelings well anyway lol.

      It may have been different (go back in time with me for a sec) Diego would have gotten her pregnant all those moons ago I think. The parents would have been more forgiving purely because it would be a less volatile scenario?? I don’t know what do you think?

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      1. No, I know you’re right because mine would have done the same thing! LOL, hypocrite much? :-p However, having been a fly on the wall throughout these folk’s lives, I have (we have) the special privilege of being objective. And, from what I’ve observed, I say that sometimes an act of love can be way more powerful than anything else! It’s amazing what love can do.

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          1. You know what’s cool about being a writer and reading other people’s stories? It’s a nice opportunity to explore objectivity that would have otherwise been ignored because if I were writing this, I would have written something similar! Oooh! This sounds like a topic for the storytelling group!

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  1. There are so many things I need to comment on…1) how cute and adorable is Gabriela?? 2) YAY a pregnancy PNG!!! so cool 3) loving the lips on Mari coupled with the bugged out eyes of Jade. 4) your wordless chapters are incredible, I mean I truly feel all the emotions, from the “what is that weird shaped pink thing in the trash” to the “we know your pregnant Mari” to the “ITS NONE OF YOUR F******* BUSINESS OK!” lastly to the “SHIT what am I going to do”. You are a brilliant person Ms. Citizen!!

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    1. Yayyyy I’m so pumped you have WP account now ❀

      1) I know, right? I freaking love her.
      2) Actually, it was cc I downloaded! ^_^ If I wasn't able to find it, I'd so do your PNG idea though. That's brilliant!
      3) Hahaha lots of expressions going on near the end there XD
      4) You are so sweet, thank you! πŸ™‚

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    1. Hahaha yup, she could not hide! Also, no one has mentioned something yet… Lina is 18 now, and has a boyfriend. Yet they IMMEDIATELY assumed it was Mari… XD So sad.


        1. LOL I cannot deny that. πŸ˜› Poor Lina and Gabriela. Their lives are so normal and boring that they just sorta fade away in the background hehehe.


  2. I love your wordless chapters. You’re so good at getting screenshots that portray exactly the right thing. It is funny that they go directly to Mari, but, really, it makes logical sense. *Lina* hasn’t been going out every night slutting around.

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    1. Hehehehehe exactly. Lina does have a bf and all, but… they know exactly who it would be LMAO. (And thank you for your compliment πŸ™‚ I love doing the wordless ones!)

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  3. It was bound to be discovered when it was just lying in the trash like that. But poor Mari. She finally broke down. I hope this is the beginning of something beautiful πŸ™‚

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    1. Yeah, she didn’t exactly hide it very well!!! And I hope this will lead to good things for her too! ❀ Thanks for reading!


  4. Gabriella you’re amazing you found the test now your parents know this amazing maybe Mari will finally get help! *Takes deep breath because she said all that in one go*
    Great chapter! I can’t wait to see the nooboo!
    *Relises she has totally disregarded Mari’s feelings*
    And I’m sure although Mari is so angry and upset at the moment this will be a positive turning point in Mari’s life? Maybe this will teach her to not sleep left, right and center in order to get away from her troubles because it will only cause more of them?
    Always the mindless optimist, me. πŸ˜€
    I love that shot of a confused Gabriella in the bathroom. I can imagine her all, like, ‘What did I do?’ :p

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    1. Hahahaha poor Gabriela! Yes, that poor little thing was just left awkwardly standing there wondering what the heck was going on. πŸ˜›

      Love your optimism, and I always love your comments πŸ™‚

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  5. I said “oh no” at least 20 times while reading this chapter.

    Mari, why would you ever just throw the pregnancy test in the trash like that. You’re smarter than that!

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    1. So true! I almost think she subconsciously WANTED it to be found, to avoid having to tell her parents outright but still having them find out. This poor girl is all kinds of messed up/damaged (and needs therapy so badly. She is a broken individual)


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